I like this one. The lines seem crisper, and there's more detail given to shading.

I like the cleaned up, revised descriptions, too. :3

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I like manga Mukuro, not anime Mukuro... :/
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Enthusiastic Hiei cosplayer.

Proud Kuwabara fan. <3
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Looks awesome!^^
Are you going to do anymore redos?=3
Thanks for pointing out that kurama is a exchange student hereXD I went for the longest time trying to figure out why kurama was foreign ._.

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Rock Lee is extremly sexy when hes completly wasted.<3


Draw Doujin?
Let me know! I promise to read it!

Your artwork has definatly improved.

I'm glad you like it ^-^
This version probably actually less time than the old one. I think it's just that in 2 years time I finally got a better understanding on how to ink and generally draw.
Watch. Two years from now I'll probably redraw this again XD I can never let things be lol

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Kurama: I know that inside of you, there is a good person.
Kris: If there is, it's 'cause I accidentally ate one.

Well, there's always room for improvement, and if you've taken all that practice to get better... Might as well show it to people. C:

Going back and updating old works can be fun, too.

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I like manga Mukuro, not anime Mukuro... :/
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Enthusiastic Hiei cosplayer.

Proud Kuwabara fan. <3
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Quality commissions for cheap! See my journal for details!

Sorry for the confusion XD I always thought I had mentioned it on the old character intros, but then I saw and was like "Oh crap! Oh crap! How could I forget to write that?!"
It was one of the main reasons I felt compelled to redo this :3

I'd actually like to redo the first chapter and a half (all the pages I did in manga studio) but I probably won't. Mainly because the story will never get anywhere if I start doing a bunch of redos XD

There are currently only 2 things I will definitely redo: The cover (once again, the old version makes me cringe), and chapter 2's cover page (because the current one is ugly and doesn't really apply to the chapter)

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Kurama: I know that inside of you, there is a good person.
Kris: If there is, it's 'cause I accidentally ate one.

It better have XD lol
I'd be sad if it didn't!

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Kurama: I know that inside of you, there is a good person.
Kris: If there is, it's 'cause I accidentally ate one.

Of course :3 I still have far to go. It's learning stuff through trial and error that makes art fun ^-^

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Kurama: I know that inside of you, there is a good person.
Kris: If there is, it's 'cause I accidentally ate one.

Haha... yeah, I would too, if it were me. XD